Desktop — 1440 × 900
Live today
Proposed
What changed, and why
- The buttons now sit fully on screen. Today they land at the bottom edge and "Explore Finvy" wraps to its own row. In the proposed version all three fit on one line with room beneath them.
- Ronald's name is no longer the largest thing on the page. It currently renders at roughly twice the size of the message and wraps onto two lines. Visitors do not arrive searching his name — they arrive carrying financial stress. The name stays in the top-left brand mark, where it belongs.
- The stage photograph is now substantial. Ronald is a speaker; a photo of him speaking is his strongest credibility asset, and today it is one of the smallest elements on the screen.
- The card no longer repeats the paragraph beside it. The current photo card retells the same biography that appears to its left. That space now carries Ronald's own sentence — already on the site, further down the page — and the two proof figures.
- One line was added under the buttons. "Pre-order the Book" does not say which book or what comes with it. One sentence answers that without moving the book ahead of speaking.
Unchanged: the headline, the paragraph, the eyebrow, the role line, the
three buttons and their order, the Facebook and Instagram links, every navigation destination,
the colors, the typeface, and the photograph. The proof figures keep Val's correction — no
dollar signs on 112K and 375K.
Phone — 390 × 844
Live today
Proposed
On a phone, the difference is larger
- Today, the first screen a phone visitor sees is filled by the name and role before the message begins. The buttons are not reachable without scrolling.
- In the proposed version, the message, the paragraph, and all three buttons appear in the first screen — and "Pre-order the Book" is also present in the top bar from the moment the page loads.
What this is: a mock-up for comparison only. Nothing on ronaldbuchananjr.com has been
changed, and nothing will be without Ronald's and Val's approval. The proposed version passes the
site's existing automated checks with no regressions.
What we are not proposing: new claims, new promises, different figures, a different voice, or a different structure below the hero. The rest of the page is untouched. Open the proposed hero full-size →
What we are not proposing: new claims, new promises, different figures, a different voice, or a different structure below the hero. The rest of the page is untouched. Open the proposed hero full-size →